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[SoJustMe]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة فيونكـه وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته كان بودي أساعدك لكن الانجليزي عندي عليه العوض ومنه العوض ماني متأكدة لكن حاسة إنه الجمل في الفاينل درافت ماهي مربوطة :| Restaurant Disaster I usually visiting the restaurant with my family ( in ) the weekend Before three weeks , I decided with my family ( to visit ) Macdonald's restaurant but we didn't the express for this restaurant for many reasons First , despite the food unhealthy and often oilily ( oily ) causing many diseases to our bodies. Second reason is that ( the ) service is ( was ) bad . when ( we ) arrived ( the ) restaurant , the ) waiters aren't ( weren't ) take ( took ) us ( our ) order . ( They let us waiting for long time ). Also employees are ( were ) slow int ( while they doing their ) work ) . The most important reason that we saw a small insect in our food . So , that was a difficult thing we cannot ignoring. At the end, we swear that dont come again to this resturant إن شاء الله يكون خالي من الأخطاء الاملائية والنحوية السكند درافت ماهو واضح ف مآقريته إيه صح يفضل إنتس تغيري اسم المطعم بما اني شوهت سمعته إن شاء الله يفيدوك الاخوان اكثر

I usually go to the restaurant with my family ( at ) the weekend
Before three weeks , I ( went to ) Macdonald's restaurant with my family, but I didn't like the service there for many reasons.
.First, the food is unhealthy which often ( oily - fatty) and that causes many diseases to our bodies

Second, ( the ) service ( was ) very bad and when ( we ) arrived ( to ) ( the ) restaurant,
the waiters ( didn't ) take ( our ) order quickly, they let us waiting for ( a ) long time . Also employees ( were ) very slow ( while they doing their ) job to serve us.

عاد ماعتقتها زين ان شاء الله تفيدك كثيير