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[Somaiah Yousef]

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

كان بودي أساعدك لكن الانجليزي عندي عليه العوض ومنه العوض

ماني متأكدة لكن حاسة إنه الجمل في الفاينل درافت ماهي مربوطة :|

Restaurant Disaster

I usually visiting the restaurant with my family ( in ) the weekend
Before three weeks , I decided with my family ( to visit ) Macdonald's restaurant but we didn't the express for this restaurant for many reasons
First , despite the food unhealthy and often oilily ( oily ) causing many diseases to our bodies.
Second reason is that ( the ) service is ( was ) bad . when ( we ) arrived ( the ) restaurant ,
the ) waiters aren't ( weren't ) take ( took ) us ( our ) order . ( They let us waiting for long time ). Also employees are ( were ) slow int ( while they doing their ) work ) .

The most important reason that we saw a small insect in our food . So , that was a difficult thing we cannot ignoring.

At the end, we swear that dont come again to this resturant

إن شاء الله يكون خالي من الأخطاء الاملائية والنحوية

السكند درافت ماهو واضح ف مآقريته

إيه صح يفضل إنتس تغيري اسم المطعم بما اني شوهت سمعته


إن شاء الله يفيدوك الاخوان اكثر