the (perfect essay writing) competition

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الملاك الأبيض hi every body , actually I'm so thankful for all of ur efforts and especially our judges and teachers con and English boy u were professional in ur correction and and especially con i really thank u for ur great efforts with us may allah bless u all guys :)

ok malak i'll tell u why i considered them wrong according to my point of view

first

actually i didn't notice that u haven't mentioned ramadan yet
also, coz i had known already that it is Ramadan, it seems odd for me when i read ( a whole one month) u know i usaully hear the article (the ) more than (a) a

i'll try to ask and inform u ok , u have a point in this *_^a

second

the V (join) doesn't need a preposition to connect it with the Object

we usually say

join the group , join the relatives ...etc

if i were u i would just say

many families join their relatives in Ramadan
instead of

many families join together with their relatives in Ramadan

together and with have the same meaning so try to avoid repeating words

third which is the most important Q

closeness and support are abstract words so they don't need articles

look more for that thing , we usually treat them like uncountable words

got it ?a

if u have any Q ask English boy, he is the boss here << dilemma

have to leave now see u guys in sha'a Allah

i really enjoyed being with u in this competition