the (perfect essay writing) competition

[MS.Fabulous]

good afternon every one
the competition is to write a perfect essay with all the elements of the essay writing
we need 4 other participants i am the first and malak is the second
we need 2 more judges con is the first ,but the jury should be graduates students
the participants well write an essay with an intro,body and conclusion 3 paragraph only
they well have a dead line to submit the essay to the jury 24 hours only , i think it is more than enough ok
the jury well chose 5 topics
and the participants well chose what kind of essay he or she wants to write about the jury well give marks according to grammar,structure,spilling and the organization of the ideas
?the mark should be out of 20 is that right?
my aim from this competition is to improve our writing skills in essay especially
if you have any thing to add just till me

[Suzi]

Ms.Fabulous

The first set is mine

Great Idea and it deserve to be at the top I will be Participant


Kkeep It Up

[Conscientious]

Ms. well done

but i think if we reduce the topics to only one it's better so we can judge accurately and fairly

but if every member writes about a different topic we may tend to nominate the interesting and exciting topic

but if u like , we can put 3 topics , i mean every judge can offer a topic and the competitors agree on one of them

this is for the competitors but how about the judge

who will correct the essays and who will choose the winner

it still have to be cleared

another thing what do u think if we make it as stages

two stages and in every stage we choose one member and finally these two members compete with each other

just an idea, u can refuse it if u feel it's hard

good luck

[sultan shammar]

طيب بس ع الطاير لان فيه بعض الاخطاء السريعه


after noon ماتجي مفرقه

الشي الثاني on تكتب one

[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Suzi Ms.Fabulous The first set is mine Great Idea and it deserve to be at the top I will be Participant Kkeep It Up

ok suzi thank you
we need 3 more participants

[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious Ms. well done but i think if we reduce the topics to only one it's better so we can judge accurately and fairly but if every member writes about a different topic we may tend to nominate the interesting and exciting topic but if u like , we can put 3 topics , i mean every judge can offer a topic and the competitors agree on one of them this is for the competitors but how about the judge who will correct the essays and who will choose the winner it still have to be cleared another thing what do u think if we make it as stages two stages and in every stage we choose one member and finally these two members compete with each other just an idea, u can refuse it if u feel it's hard good luck

ok 3 topics
thanks con

[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sultan shammar طيب بس ع الطاير لان فيه بعض الاخطاء السريعه after noon ماتجي مفرقه الشي الثاني on تكتب one

ops thanks
for the correction

[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious Ms. well done but i think if we reduce the topics to only one it's better so we can judge accurately and fairly but if every member writes about a different topic we may tend to nominate the interesting and exciting topic but if u like , we can put 3 topics , i mean every judge can offer a topic and the competitors agree on one of them this is for the competitors but how about the judge who will correct the essays and who will choose the winner it still have to be cleared another thing what do u think if we make it as stages two stages and in every stage we choose one member and finally these two members compete with each other just an idea, u can refuse it if u feel it's hard good luck

you well correct then discuss the marks with the whole jury act like you are a real teacher ok
the other idea about the stages is great i love it it is more
fun this way
thanks con

[English boy]

I am in

[English boy]

I mean plz put me through