the (perfect essay writing) competition

[Conscientious]

I will correct ur essay guys when u agree on one topic and one type of essay otherwise i can's just correct it randomly

i can only correct according to what i learned from my instructors at university , i can't just invent a new way of correction and then wrong members by choosing the winner

And to be frank , i know that English boy have not studied these types of the essays in the university because boys section is different from ours so he may not be able to correct following the same rules of comparison and contrast essay , that's why i don't blame him :)a

so what i'm saying , i prefer that English boy will be the judge of this stage coz it's like a free writing

and i'll be for the next stage which won't be free (one topic , one type)a

and we will be together for the final stage

what do u think English boy ?

[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious I will correct ur essay guys when u agree on one topic and one type of essay otherwise i can's just correct it randomly i can only correct according to what i learned from my instructors at university , i can't just invent a new way of correction and then wrong members by choosing the winner And to be frank , i know that English boy have not studied these types of the essays in the university because boys section is different from ours so he may not be able to correct following the same rules of comparison and contrast essay , that's why i don't blame him :)a so what i'm saying , i prefer that English boy will be the judge of this stage coz it's like a free writing and i'll be for the next stage which won't be free (one topic , one type)a and we will be together for the final stage what do u think English boy ?

you are right i am studying in AL.Fisalia Branch
and our books is different from you guys
and our teacher have a different and a unique way of studying

so you may find my essay kind of different

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة MS.Fabulous you are right i am studying in AL.Fisalia Branch and our books is different from you guys and our teacher have a different and a unique way of studying so you may find my essay kind of different

No, i haven't read ur essay yet

but i don't think that girls is different here or there

look at my previous post

isn't that way u have studied how to write the comparison and contast essay ? if it's not then i'll do like English boy and just correct without adhering to the rules of the type

i thought we are the same

[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious No, i haven't read ur essay yet but i don't think that girls is different here or there look at my previous post isn't that way u have studied how to write the comparison and contast essay ? if it's not then i'll do like English boy and just correct without adhering to the rules of the type i thought we are the same

it is kind of different from our
way of writing essay i will look at my book but i am used to write short essay
and my techer always says that i use
simple sentences a lot

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious I will correct ur essay guys when u agree on one topic and one type of essay otherwise i can's just correct it randomly i can only correct according to what i learned from my instructors at university , i can't just invent a new way of correction and then wrong members by choosing the winner And to be frank , i know that English boy have not studied these types of the essays in the university because boys section is different from ours so he may not be able to correct following the same rules of comparison and contrast essay , that's why i don't blame him :)a so what i'm saying , i prefer that English boy will be the judge of this stage coz it's like a free writing and i'll be for the next stage which won't be free (one topic , one type)a and we will be together for the final stage what do u think English boy ?

well let's break this down! here we've got 4 finished essays so far & fortunately 2 of them about Ramdan. The rest 2 are about social network! it seems u mind urs & I'll care of mine! fairenough ..

about studying such ruls! I don't think ours is much different from urs but in some cases we don't have to follow ruls cuz it's just for the begaining then u can do ur essays smoothly regardless structures, ruls, process..etc

anyway, if u are agreed on that just let me know! I will be doing this and I'll give comments on each answer sheet. u will announce the final results and the winner.

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة English boy well let's break this down! here we've got 4 finished essays so far & fortunately 2 of them about Ramdan. The rest 2 are about social network! it seems u mind urs & I'll care of mine! fairenough .. about studying such ruls! I don't think ours is much different from urs but in some cases we don't have to follow ruls cuz it's just for the begaining then u can do ur essays smoothly regardless structures, ruls, process..etc anyway, if u are agreed on that just let me know! I will be doing this and I'll give comments on each answer sheet. u will announce the final results and the winner.

ok i'll correct them all like what u did but u have to give me time coz i'm conscientious in my correction loooool

by the way there are a lot of things u neglected in malak's essay look at my correction and tell me ur opinion *_^ a

about choosing the winner give every member her mark out of 20 and we will count it with mine and see who will get the highest mark ok


thanx a lot English boy

[Conscientious]

Malak u did well

but u have be careful about Run-on and fragment and to avoid this thing don't write long sentences, ur sentences actually are
so long taking four lines or more

second use supiorior words . for example use exact words instead of bad or good

u don't have many grammatical mistakes , or misspelling

Good luck malak wait ur result

[Conscientious]

Miss Fabulous

well done

this is yours

[Conscientious]

Yellow = words that u have to omit
Red= ur mistakes
Blue= words I added

[Conscientious]

suzi

well done

this is yours