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[delicate]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رويده عباس I write this thoughts yesterday so please correct me i was a girl with a long curls hear I was a girl with long curled hair with a big shiny smail with a big shiny smile with soft happy dreams i saw the beards flew and sing I saw the flying and singing birds i saw the sun glows as a golden ring I saw the the glowing sun as a golden ring i was a happy girl now""" hear i am now here Iam my tears never dry my sorrow never die lived in sadness and gloom living in sadness and gloom waiting the happenss to bloom waiting for happiness to bloom i was a girl

what do you think?

[رويده عباس]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة delicate what do you think?

I think it's better

thanks a lot