the (perfect essay writing) competition

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة English boy well let's break this down! here we've got 4 finished essays so far & fortunately 2 of them about Ramdan. The rest 2 are about social network! it seems u mind urs & I'll care of mine! fairenough .. about studying such ruls! I don't think ours is much different from urs but in some cases we don't have to follow ruls cuz it's just for the begaining then u can do ur essays smoothly regardless structures, ruls, process..etc anyway, if u are agreed on that just let me know! I will be doing this and I'll give comments on each answer sheet. u will announce the final results and the winner.

ok i'll correct them all like what u did but u have to give me time coz i'm conscientious in my correction loooool

by the way there are a lot of things u neglected in malak's essay look at my correction and tell me ur opinion *_^ a

about choosing the winner give every member her mark out of 20 and we will count it with mine and see who will get the highest mark ok


thanx a lot English boy