the (perfect essay writing) competition

[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الملاك الأبيض dear con i'm really very thankful for ur explanation for this type of essay but actually I'm so familiar in this type of essay and i did the same steps that u mentioned above , i mean i have some mistakes in some sentences structure as English boy corrected , yet i did a comparison essay NOT free writing and i did the way of point by point ,which i talked about family climate in Ramadan ,and then in the other months and so i did in the other body paragraphs as belong to why i chose Ramadan and other months with out determine the months that i want to compare with , is because u guys were not exact with ur topics that u offered for us , and because i can't mention one month to compare with Ramadan cuz many months are the same in their aspects and the only months that different is Ramadan and thu alhijah, which i don't see any way to compare with the two of them i'm not perfect in writing and i like to be not perfect to learn and learn more from my mistakes , it does n't matter if i lose or win , as for as i'm learning and get benefit , i liked ur competition and its really motivate us to be much better in writing and this precious opportunity was given from u guys ,con, miss ,and English boy so thank u all and please stay this way and lets continue our way in English

Malak your essay was really good
ma shaa Allah
mine is n't perfect at all

thank you too and you are right it dose n't matter if we win or n't what matter is that we learn from our mistakes
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