بليز صححوا لي التعبير

[هذا طبعي]

My Sister
I have one sister.she name is Ashwag .she is fourteen years old .she was born in Amarica.she always wear skirt and T-shirt .she like ng . she is crazy about computer.she does not like fashion shows.she can speak English. At weekends she is watching tv.she always study at eight p.m.I like her becaus she is very lovely.

[Bayan.J.S]

her name is

She always wear a skirt and a T-shirt

she like ng <~ مافهمت الجملة دي !

about computers

she likes to watch tv.

And I like her because she is very lovely

إزا كان التعبير براجراف كتابي فبعد كل نقطة عند بداية كل جملة تخلي الحرف كابيتال

وبالتوفيق :) !

[هذا طبعي]

الحين بالجمله الثانيه مااكتب she على طول herوالجمله اللي مافهمتيها انا غلطانه she like(مو راضيه تنكتب الكلمه مدري ليه )بس هي -كوكنق- وتسلمين والله يوفقك دنيا واخره

[Bayan.J.S]

ايوا her بس ،،

الجملة التانية حتكون She likes c o o k i n g <~ بدون فواصل طبعا بين الحروف ،، بس لانها من جد مو راضية تنكتب هع

آمين يارب وياكِ ان شا الله :) !