my first essay , need your opinion

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة mero ab اول ايساي ليا احس اني مخبصه .. اعطوني رايكم how to a be successful student education is so important and being successful when you were younger means you have a bright future ahead. you and everyone want to move forward and improve m becoming something bigger . To be a successful student is stepping stone to become a successful adult. you have to work hard for it and earn it by studying and practicing. first , listen to the teacher carefully and write notes for things he\she mentioned and if you have a question, don't be shy to ask your teacher. it is better to learn from your mistakes than being mistaken in your whole life. remember it's not going to improve your grades only, but your knowledge as well.

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