please correct the paragrapg

[English boy]

I went through this in fast. plz check ur mistakes again before u hand it out!! all the best

by the way, I noticed that u have used (available) several times as a Verb, that would not work cuz it's Adj, and meaning completely differs ..


Go through , check I might have damaged the whole thig

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة English boy I went through this in fast. plz check ur mistakes again before u hand it out!! all the best by the way, I noticed that u have used (available) several times as a Verb, that would not work cuz it's Adj, and meaning completely differs .. Go through , check I might have damaged the whole thig

Nour
Kindly remove this participation as well.. Wallah u don't deserve it