الرايتنج مجنني

[رغد محمد]

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i just want to share my notes with you guys . as belong to your essay raghad i could say in my humble opinion that your writing in this cause and effect essay is much better than the first one you wrote .because your sentences structure is very good and clear .

~...Hiiiiii dear MaloOoOokah



Thank you dear. You don't know how happy I'm when I found you and Mr.Fahad to help me develop my writing coz I add this course late maybe around month ago, and I couldn't find anyone to support me. So, I start to learn by myself. In fact, I were like Rose, the same writing and mistakes, but now I'm getting better, alhamdullah, thank you honey. You are so helpful and supportive person

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Ok, look I have some Qs, and I want you to answer it, deal?

Nowadays, most of us have a trouble sleeping.

?...Is it good to put "a" before the word trouble or not and why

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. They stay all day doing their homeworks, researches, or study for the exams which forces them to stay all night doing them.

Why did you put "s" after homework coz when I wrote it the word file couldn't accept it ?
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Whatever the reason was, we should try to organize our time and stop wasting it with things that will not benefit us in any way.

?..."Why did you change "is" to "was

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?About your Q, I think Mr.Fahad explane it very well. Do you understand him

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~....Thank you again and again honey

See you soon

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