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[ابو فهد*]

Miss Raghad

Please see your Ammmmmmmmmm


Miss Rose


We are looking for your sharing, this is your subject

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ابو فهد* Miss Raghad Please see your Ammmmmmmmmm Miss Rose We are looking for your sharing, this is your subject

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Thank you soOoOo much Mr.Fahad,

You made look to the things that I advise others to do it, but I forget to remaind myself about it

Really thank you from my heart for your time and knowledge

??...May I ask you Qs, are you a teaher or something

!...Coz your writing and answers masha'allah much better than regular students

Tell me how did you develope your writing and language, too?

?The last Q, can you give us one of your essays to learn more skills
Thank you again big brother

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[الملاك الأبيض]

hi for you both master abu fahad and my lovely frined raghad

i just want to share my notes with you guys . as belong to your essay raghad i could say in my humble opinion that your writing in this cause and effect essay is much better than the first one you wrote .because your sentences structure is very good and clear .

second thing i correct your essay like this :

the orange words i corrected them for you

the green words are words that i added

and there is just one blue word that i want to ask you about

which is : him/her
i mean is it right to write such a thing in the essay don't we have to be more specific in our writing and write instead just "him" for example ?

i hope to answer me about that point >hope you all the good in the world for you raghad and abu fahad.

[ابو فهد*]

Greetings to all

i just want to share my notes with you

You're welcome, and this is what we are looking for
sharing is caring

in the essay don't we have to be more specific in our writing and write instead just "him" for example

Good point, I see there is no wrong to write both him/her because Raghad doesn’t talk about specific gender of male or female, her writing is open for any child and this is a formal style of writing

hope you all the good in the world for you raghad and abu fahad

Thank you, I owe to express the same feelings for you


Raghad's questions

??...May I ask you Qs, are you a teacher or something

No, I'm willing to be a teacher in the future

Tell me how did you develop your writing and language, too

By doing more practicing such as writing e-mails and reports, etc. However, the best way to improve your language is by sharing others through writing and speaking
My advice to all of you to use E writing in this forum, please, don't miss this chance of learning

?The last Q, can you give us one of your essays to learn more skills

Unfortunately, I have no time for writing because I'm traveling this weekend and I will be disconnected of internet, but you can imagine my writing. If I want to write essay I will write about this subject WOMEN AND DRIVING A CAR

Any qestions and comments are welcome, god bless you

[Ro$e]

Hello Raghad and Abo fahad
I am glad that my subject has a benefit not just for me but for all
sorry i was not be able to write anything i was studing the oral communication
thank you so much for all
i will try to write today

ِِِِِِAِِbo fahad i cant wait to read your essay about(WOMEN AND DRIVING A CAR)
Raghad i cant thank you enough
malokah thank you so much

[رغد محمد]

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i just want to share my notes with you guys . as belong to your essay raghad i could say in my humble opinion that your writing in this cause and effect essay is much better than the first one you wrote .because your sentences structure is very good and clear .

~...Hiiiiii dear MaloOoOokah



Thank you dear. You don't know how happy I'm when I found you and Mr.Fahad to help me develop my writing coz I add this course late maybe around month ago, and I couldn't find anyone to support me. So, I start to learn by myself. In fact, I were like Rose, the same writing and mistakes, but now I'm getting better, alhamdullah, thank you honey. You are so helpful and supportive person

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Ok, look I have some Qs, and I want you to answer it, deal?

Nowadays, most of us have a trouble sleeping.

?...Is it good to put "a" before the word trouble or not and why

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. They stay all day doing their homeworks, researches, or study for the exams which forces them to stay all night doing them.

Why did you put "s" after homework coz when I wrote it the word file couldn't accept it ?
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Whatever the reason was, we should try to organize our time and stop wasting it with things that will not benefit us in any way.

?..."Why did you change "is" to "was

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?About your Q, I think Mr.Fahad explane it very well. Do you understand him

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~....Thank you again and again honey

See you soon

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[رغد محمد]

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By doing more practicing such as writing e-mails and reports, etc. However, the best way to improve your language is by sharing others through writing and speaking My advice to all of you to use E writing in this forum, please, don't miss this chance of learning

Masha'allah. It's an amazing way to learn. I will try to do that. Thank you big brother

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Unfortunately, I have no time for writing because I'm traveling this weekend and I will be disconnected of internet, but you can imagine my writing. If I want to write essay I will write about this subject WOMEN AND DRIVING A CAR Any qestions and comments are welcome, god bless you [COLOR]

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May Allah reward you for eveything, teaching, correction, and advising. Thank you again and take care.

Happy travilling

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Hello Raghad and Abo fahad I am glad that my subject has a benefit not just for me but for all sorry i was not be able to write anything i was studing the oral communication thank you so much for all i will try to write today

~...Hiiii dear Rose



Where have you been...? we were looking for you to know if you want any help or ask any Q ..?

If you need to anything I'm here darling...Ok?

...May Allah help you with studing honey

...See you soom dear

Raghad Mohammed



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[الملاك الأبيض]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد ،’ ~...Hiiiiii dear MaloOoOokah Thank you dear. You don't know how happy I'm when I found you and Mr.Fahad to help me develop my writing coz I add this course late maybe around month ago, and I couldn't find anyone to support me. So, I start to learn by myself. In fact, I were like Rose, the same writing and mistakes, but now I'm getting better, alhamdullah, thank you honey. You are so helpful and supportive person don't worry my dear we gonna support each other till we all pass together in god willing . ،’ Ok, look I have some Qs, and I want you to answer it, deal? [/LEFT] deal ,i'm with in what ever u want .just don't rluctat to ask . ?...Is it good to put "a" before the word trouble or not and why ،’ yes of course it is needed to put "a " before names and names with adjectives like when we say in this e.g : he is a good man i rented a house . Why did you put "s" after homework coz when I wrote it the word file couldn't accept it ? ،’ amm in this part i put the "s' for two reasons : because u put the subject as a plural and the second thing that they need alot of time to do their homworks so it can't possibly to be just one homework or research and stay to do it all day long > don't u think so ? Whatever the reason was, we should try to organize our time and stop wasting it with things that will not benefit us in any way. ?..."Why did you change "is" to "was as belong to this part i think the both "is& was " is correct to use ,yet i used "was" because u already diagnosed the causes in above ,and because if there was any reasons u don't know or mentioned .thats why i saw that was would be more appropriate >> thats of course my approach and i hope to abu fahad correct my saying if i said anything wrong . ،’ ?About your Q, I think Mr.Fahad explane it very well. Do you understand him yes i did thanks to Allah and then abufahad . ’، ~....Thank you again and again honey See you soon ،’

don't worry about it . and in contrast i'm so happy to have this nice opportunity to write in english with u guys

amm bythe way i attached my argumentative essay about the subject of the effect of tv on children .but i didn't have a chance to send it to the instructor to check it so please if there was anything wrong don't forget to inform me .waiting your notes about me .see ya my friend .

[بسيطه]

keep going i really learn a lot from your subject



thank you all

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة بسيطه keep going i really learn a lot from your subject thank you all

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~...Welcome... Welcome

Nice to find someone cares about what we're writing

Allah willing we are going to continue learning

??...Will you share your opinion or essay with us

Thank you soOo much for your words

You are welcome any time

??...I have one Q.. Are you male or female



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