محتاجه ارائكم وتصحيحكم ....

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السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركاته
كيفكم؟كيف المذاكره معاكم؟ان شاءالله تمام
انا الان قاعده اتدرب عاالرايتنق طبعا اول خطوه لازم اني اتقن البراقراف قبل ما اكتب الايسي وهذا البراقراف عن (اهم يوم في حياتي) ابغاكم تتصححوه ليا عشان اشوف مستواي واخطائي واعدل قبل ما اتدرب عالايسي
My Wedding Day

My wedding day was the most important day in my life for many reasons.First of
all,it was the day I changed from girl to matur women,take the responsibilty,deal with life problems,and make the right decisions. Second, from that day forward I laerned that is married life depend on the love,espect,and sharing from both husband and wife.Finally, in one hand there was sad moments in it like moving out away of my parents and my family,ut in the other hand I was happy becouse I will have my own house and my own children. To conclude my wedding day was turning point in my life for the better and it was the most happiness and important day in my life.
معليش كتبته بسرعه الاسطر ملخبطه بس اهم شي ابغى اتاكد من صحه الجمل والقرامر
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