A new idea for new students in English section

[رغد محمد]

Good evening friends.
Where are you?? I hope you are good.
I will give you my deive essay, and I want your opinion on it.
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This picture has a lot of hope .Hope for something good in the future .Something will change life to a better life .This hope mix with embittered of waiting ,passion, and longing to the future .This waited kills the patience for this hope .
This picture has a thousand of feelings that make the person who seen it will feel different feelings about it. The black and gray colors made a lot of changes in it. Like gave the strong feelings, pure hope, and beautiful waiting.
This picture has something unique .It tells the person who seen it Waite!!!! Look at me for a long time to get the hope that you forgot it from me.
In my opinion, this picture is me
Correct me dear Con