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[عيون عليا]

السلام عليكم جميعا
احببت قبل ان اغادركم على امل العوده اليكن قريبا ان شاء الله ان اكتب عن الصوره الرائعه التي وضعتها رغد محمد فعبرت بطريقه الخاصه أأمل ان اكون قد احسنت الكتابه..
When I Look at this picture ;I feel it have depressedfeellikeme.
That black clouds will rainnig black rain. It is not carries the good things for the earth.
Also, our life which have a lot of that black clouds.
At the same time , no wonder if I say (in the end of the tunnel there is a light )
because there is a suspension bridge is giving us the hope ,but we are waiting a lot even to complete the building of bridge.
However, we shouldStrengthen
ourPatience in this life.

please correct me co

Sweety teacher