A new idea for new students in English section

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد When I see (look at) this picture I see all kinds of darkness,sadness,and everything bad it had happend before.But between (among) all these feelings I see something wonderful .This thing is the light that chin ( shines and deletes everything bad .I see hope after all these years of tire ( it is verb and u have to use noun , like hardship and so on ),hard work,and bad days . waaaaaaaaaaaaaaw incrudable feelings I felt when I saw this amazing picture u may say i feel of this incredible feeling once i look at this picture I hope I can get my way as soon as I can ................................. I am waiting for your responds see ya

be aware of the spelling

plz write ur essay in the WORD and then copy it here to be sure of the spelling

try to make ur essay more formal unless u just want to write regardless the rules of writing an essay

do u want me to correct ur essay as formal or informal essay ???a

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