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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا Ok, girls Now, I will put my first deive essay, and I hope to be good. We should write about that to practice our skills. My First Lovely country When I want to travel to outside I will not be confused to where I can go. I will choose Italy directly because it is my first lovely country. It is attracting all people to visits it; really it is an amazing country. I cannot forget my trip to it before many years ago It has the beautiful cities which consist of historic places. First, I went to Rome, and I took several pictures ( i think the word photos is more suitable) beside a famous Colosseum which has the beautiful Legends (i didn't understand this word )a . Then, I visited a great Verona which has the best love story in the world. When I stood in (at) the window of Juliet I imagined myself is (as) a hero of the story. Next, I went to the state of Tuscany. There was the world's strangest tower. It is an italic Piza tower .There was I saw many people from different country. They were touring inside it. Finally, a (the ) beauty of Italy is increasing from city to another one. . In fact , I cannot forget that a great country which has advantages of the tourist country (i didn't understand this sentence , could u please explain it further , or say it in Arabic , so i can tell u what to say instead , ok)a. I'm excited to know my mistakes. My questions: 1)Is my writing is deive essay or not?? yes , i think so 2)I want to know your point of view in my writing , and your advices sooooooo wonderful MashaAllah . Thanks a lot in advanced correct me co.

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Good morning every body Happy friday to everyone today I am going to write my deive essay ,and I want your opinion OK ................................. My First Visit to The center of Specail Needs Commonly I heard that any person want to see the Specail Needs it( he ) must have a strong heart especailly when they were children . When I was in (the) middle (intermediate) school I went to the Center of Specail Needs with my teachers ,and my friends.It was amazing and wonderful,but at the beginning I couldn’t enter to the center when I saw the (a) child (not more than five years of age (old) ) deponds on a l( that is this ) walking near the door of the center .I felt like my pulse (beats is more common ) of my heart stop and I couldn’t breathe ,too.It was so so diffecult on (to) me,and my teachres and my friends ,too.After five minutes of crying I went to the center ,and I saw alot of chilren some of them have physical disbility ,others have mentally disabled (disability) ,and others have both of disabilities.It was so hard on us.You know (informal) there personalities is( are) amazing,wonderful,and incurdable. When I was there I met a handsome boy; his name is Turkey .He was at(about) 9 years old .He tuch my heart with his big mind .I played with him so much ( u may say a lot , bt i'm not sure ),and I cryed when he spelled my name Angham waaaaw .It was incrudable feelings especailly that my name is tuff on (hard for ) the children to say (pronounc) it .It is wonderful that you to affected on someone . Really when we saw those children, we felt the happiness in our heart after crying at the bebinning ,and we appreciate the blessings that Allah give ( gives or gave ) it to us so much . This was an amazing visiting .It teachs me that if someone feels like dosen’t have a goel in life, he may go to any center of specail needs ,and you( he )will see things that make you( him) apprecaite your( his) life more than ever . please CO dear correct my mistakes

wonderfullllllllllllllllllllll MashaAllah

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Thank you so much dear I have an idea What about put a picture here in this page and descrip it ??? Do you like it ??? Because there is not any acticity here Please give me your opinion

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yea u have to do that
amazing idea

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا In fact, I cannot correct your essay because I am still trying to be good in the writing, but in my opinion, you have a few mistakes in the spelling.I will let the correcting to our sweety teacher co . Do not worry your writing is wonderful Best wishes

may Allah blessu and reward u my dear friend for ur sweet tounge