A new idea for new students in English section

[عيون عليا]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد thank you dear liston ,I want tel you something please separate between the words Ok ...Thank you I like your topic .I hope it’s easy.I will try ,and give you main tomorrow ,deal?? see ya

I put separate between the lines, but I don't know why it does not appear .

I think that mistake because I was writing from my iphon

I am so sorry girls

[عيون عليا]

Nice topic, I love it

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There are a lot of things make me angry ;for example,somebody Exploits my kindness for a temporary benefit, somebody criticizes me with a rude, and Indirect ways
,but I like the respectable and Polite Criticizes, somebody ignores me, or he is appearing the Lack of respect. These are several of reason make me angry.

Thanks halaha zaid

please correct me co

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا Nice topic, I love it [SIZE=6COLOR=darkorchid][/color][/size] There are a lot of things make me angry ;for example,somebody Exploits my kindness for a temporary benefit, somebody criticizes me with a rude, and Indirect ways ,but I like the respectable and Polite Criticizes (criticism), somebody ignores me, or he is appearing( showing ) the Lack of respect. These are several of reasons make me angry. Thanks halaha zaid please correct me co

yellow =should b dropped
the red letters= should be added
the red words =the substitute

u writing is wonderful , keep it up

also it's better to say ( the one who exploits me ,,, etc ) instead of (somebody exploits me ,,,etc)a

get it ?a

[عيون عليا]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious yellow =should b dropped the red letters= should be added the red words =the substitute u writing is wonderful , keep it up also it's better to say ( the one who exploits me ,,, etc ) instead of (somebody exploits me ,,,etc)a get it ?a

Yes, I get it.
Oh my dear,
Thank you so much
you are a wonderful teacher.

Sincerely,

[عيون عليا]

Ok, girls
Now, I will put my first deive essay, and I hope to be good.
We should write about that to practice our skills.

My First Lovely

When I want to travel to outside I will not be confused to where I can go.

I will choose Italy directly because it is my first lovely country.

It is attracting all people to visits it; really it is an amazing country.

I cannot forget my trip to it before many years ago

It has the beautiful cities which consist of historic places.

First, I went to Rome, and I took several pictures beside

a famous Colosseum which has the beautiful Legends .

Then, I visited a great Verona which has the best love story in the world.

When I stood in the window of Juliet I imagine myself is a hero of the story.

Next, I went to the state of Tuscany. There was the world's strangest

tower. It is an italic Piza tower .There was I saw many people from

different country. They were touring inside it.

Finally, a beauty of Italy is increasing from city to another one. .

In fact , I cannot forget that a great country which

has advantages of the tourist country.

I'm excited to know my mistakes.
My questions:
1)Is my writing is deive essay or not??
2)I want to know your point of view in my writing , and your advices.
Thanks a lot in advanced
correct me co.