A new idea for new students in English section

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا SALUT .... when I see this topic I want to write more than before. It is amazing idea. ........................... my answer : first, I hope to go to Makkah to visit my family and "Almasjid Alhram" then, I want to do alot of Obedience to god more than before next, I will try to avoid watching TV. fainally , maybe I will cook delicious dishes.. please, correct my mistakes Sincerely,

Masha’allah girl you are gooood .You have to vist us always here ok to improve your writing .
lets see:
you wrote in the second sentence the word see but the correct is saw
بمعنى انك عندما شفتي الموضوع وليس عندما شايفة الموضوع ,فهمتي علي ؟؟
Thank you my dear but we have to thank Abduallah for his creator idea
The red colors are the mistakes after the correct ,and the blue colors are the words that I couldn’t understand
Go ahead girl you are goooooooood

We want see you here always
see ya
Allah make you what you want true my dear