When I see (look at) this picture I see all kinds of darkness,sadness,and everything bad it had happend before.But between (among) all these feelings I see something wonderful .This thing is the light that chin ( shines and deletes everything bad .I see hope after all these years of tire ( it is verb and u have to use noun , like hardship and so on ),hard work,and bad days .
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaw incrudable feelings I felt when I saw this amazing picture
u may say
i feel of this incredible feeling once i look at this picture
I hope I can get my way as soon as I can
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I am waiting for your responds
see ya