14-10-2011, 03:07 AM
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تاريخ التسجيل: Sep 2009
التخصص: English Literature
نوع الدراسة: إنتظام
المستوى: متخرج
الجنس: ذكر
المشاركات: 491
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رد: please correct the paragrapg
I went through this in fast. plz check ur mistakes again before u hand it out!! all the best
by the way, I noticed that u have used (available) several times as a Verb, that would not work cuz it's Adj, and meaning completely differs ..
Go through , check I might have damaged the whole thig
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