الرايتنج مجنني

[~~||* ملكة الأحاسيس *||~~]

Hello every body

I like this subject and I want to participate with you all because I see all of you are awesome

Raghooooooodah you are always amazing and every time I leave the fourm and back I found you became better

I love you girl

Keep going

Abu Fahad you are very good teacher I liked your correction

You are sooooooooo good man

Keep going

Maloooookh you are very good and I love you very much

you are helpful person

Keep going

Raghoooodah this is my correction

I'm sorry because I will not participate again because I don't have internet

I'm in my uncle's house

Please Keeeeep going

~Malekat Al- Ahasys ~

[ياسمينة الشام]

The first thing I would like to thank you all for the great efforts ,,,
this topic search for it since the forum
god bless Wellness

wallah , if they found time to write my essay,, I wrote to correct me, but my kids don,t allow me to sit in front of computer to study, there are never other have requirements......

[الملاك الأبيض]

raghood babe i corrected your essay for you you can see it down below

[الملاك الأبيض]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ~~||* ملكة الأحاسيس *||~~ Hello every body I like this subject and I want to participate with you all because I see all of you are awesome Raghooooooodah you are always amazing and every time I leave the fourm and back I found you became better I love you girl Keep going Abu Fahad you are very good teacher I liked your correction You are sooooooooo good man Keep going Maloooookh you are very good and I love you very much you are helpful person Keep going Raghoooodah this is my correction I'm sorry because I will not participate again because I don't have internet I'm in my uncle's house Please Keeeeep going ~Malekat Al- Ahasys ~

hi malekat al ahasys itis nice to see u here and nice to see your comment . we will all keep going to take benefit from each other and share our information together .i hope to see your essays too to share with us . see u later sweety .

[ابو فهد*]

Hiiiiiiiii friends

Really, I miss you all and I can’t express what my heart maintains for you
I’m very happy to see your essays, interaction and participating during my absence, I found a lot of positive comments and attachments which I couldn’t check them carefully. In addition of that, you show quick ability to learn and implement what you have learnt recently

I did quick scan for your essays and I desired to provide my notes to you


Mala’ak’s essay


It is very perfect, organized, amusing and valuable. You used an advanced language for your subject. No more corrections are needed except Raghad’s notes and you forgot to write the title

Teacher Raghad
(in the near future)


I would like to correct this word of Mala'ak's essay (colures). It is color or colour (British used)

yet it has it's (yet it's has a) bad and dangerous influence

Yet it has it’s a bad and dangerous influence, because the second (it’s) is a possessive form of it

Regarding to your essay

One the other hand,correction On the other hand

but the atmosphere of the college is different than secondary school.

More better if you write environment instead of atmosphere

students know how to communicate with their friend in a better way, they can learn the real meaning of studying in university.

Best of the best statement

Finally, your whole essay is more logical and met academic writing requirements. I’m sure that I missed to write comment for some notes, so please remind me and ask your Qs


BEST REGARDS

[ابو فهد*]

Hello every body I like this subject and I want to participate with you all because I see all of you are awesome Raghooooooodah you are always amazing and every time I leave the fourm and back I found you became better I love you girl Keep going Abu Fahad you are very good teacher I liked your correction You are sooooooooo good man Keep going Maloooookh you are very good and I love you very much you are helpful person Keep going Raghoooodah this is my correction I'm sorry because I will not participate again because I don't have internet I'm in my uncle's house Please Keeeeep going ~Malekat Al- Ahasys ~

welcome 1000000

You will add value by your sharing,because the book recognized by it's title
(only joke)

[ابو فهد*]

The first thing I would like to thank you all for the great efforts ,,, this topic search for it since the forum god bless Wellness wallah , if they found time to write my essay,, I wrote to correct me, but my kids don,t allow me to sit in front of computer to study, there are never other have requirements......

You're welcome & thank you so much Yasminat Al sham

where there's a will, there's a way

I hope your kids get a heavy sleeping till you write your essay and deliver it for correction, if you couldn't write it now, after examination end write your essay and we will correct it

This my suggestion, what about others

Best regards

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ~~||* ملكة الأحاسيس *||~~ Hello every body I like this subject and I want to participate with you all because I see all of you are awesome Raghooooooodah you are always amazing and every time I leave the fourm and back I found you become better I love you girl Keep going Raghoooodah this is my correction I'm sorry because I will not participate again because I don't have internet I'm in my uncle's house Please Keeeeep going ~Malekat Al- Ahasys ~

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~...Hiiiiiiiii Malekha

??...I'm sOoOo happy to see you here darling. Where have you been

~...Of course you can participate dear

~...Thank you honey. I love you too dear

We will complete our learning, and we want you with us dear

Thank you darling for your correction. Thank you from my heart

Please come back, we want to see different correction to be perfect Allah willing

~...See you soon sweety

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[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ياسمينة الشام The first thing I would like to thank you all for the great efforts ,,, this topic search for it since the forum god bless Wellness wallah , if they found time to write my essay,, I wrote to correct me, but my kids don,t allow me to sit in front of computer to study, there are never other have requirements......

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~...Hello honey

...Thank you for your words darling

OoOoh dear ... May Allah with you ...children and studying is something I can't handle it coz I loOoOove children soOoOo much, and I can't study when they are playing around me. Actually, I play with them

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

May Allah with you and help to achaive your dreams dear

Please if you have any time, just send you essay to correct it for you, deal??

See ya



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[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الملاك الأبيض raghood babe i corrected your essay for you you can see it down below

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~...Hiiii dear

~...Thank you MaloOoOokah


:About your Q

. We can say that they feel uncomfortable to know each other in quiet of time.

You said that you didn't understand this pink color

..Ok

I meant that they can know each other with the passage of time
??...or with the time ... Did you understand me dear

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I understand every word that you correct it for me

Really, I appreciate everyting that you did it for me

~...Thanks honey

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