A new idea for new students in English section

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious U see Ragad , I told u before , people are two types . that's why I don't want to correct randomly for anybody without his permission I don't want them to be frustrated as u are now , I don't know why are u frustrated ? may be because I'm correcting for u , so when u see the red color in ur text , u feel disappointed O dear I hope you are not sad on me .In fact ,what you said is true maybe because I did not used to find someone correct my mistakes because I thought I am good enough ,but when you correct my mistakes I realized that I’m not that good ,and I have to learn more and more without stop . Ok , I'll suggest something I will correct ur paragraph informally , so that can reduce ur mistakes , if u want Please correct it in two ways please if you don’t mind dear Also , as I told u before try not to make spelling mistakes at all because u r not in the exam , so u can use the dictionary or Microsoft Word to make sure of the spelling And there is a very important point which is : TRY to adhere to what u know ألتزمي بالشي اللي تعرفيه Whether in the grammar or the word usage How ??a In the grammar , use only the grammatical rules which u know and use only the simple and continuous present and past tense . Don't use the perfect tense because u may not be capable to use it because it is the most difficult tense for the beginners In the word usage , when u want to use a new word u have to consult the dictionary to see how they use it and which part of speech it is (adj ,verb, noun …etc) and how they put in a sentence and so on . the advisable dictionary is Oxford Dictionary as a book or http://dictionary.cambridge.org/ As an online website. U know , I always use this online dictionary when I come to correct you all , it's so useful So don't use the new words randomly Allah makes your life happy as you do it for me now. Really appreciate every single word you wrote, and I understand it too. If I remember anything I'll be back to write it for u Good luck

First, I did not see your replay except now so I’m so so so sorry dear
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Any word I will wrote it’s not enough to thank you for your support, and help my best teacher

I will do everything you told me to do, and I will get better in the future Allah willing.

See you soon my best teacher

[الأمواج]

I will be back..
good idea..In fact I like when I describe picture any one
and describe my felling ..
Thank u Ragad..

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الأمواج I will be back.. good idea..In fact I like when I describe picture any one and describe my felling .. Thank u Ragad..

Thank you dear so much
I’m waiting for you

See you soon

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Where are every body ?????
I hope see you soon here my friend

[عيون عليا]

رغد

Amazing picture!

You have Wonderful feelings;keep going(masha allah)

I will be back again. also, I will describe it
Note
I think when we describe a picture; we should write in a present continues. what do you think co ??
I hear this information from a teacher.

[عيون عليا]

lagend= اساطير من اسطوره

In fact , I cannot forget that a great country which


has advantages of the tourist country (i didn't understand this sentence , could u please explain it further , or say it in Arabic , so i can tell u what to say instead , ok)a.

اقصد (أنني لا استطيع نسيان الدوله العظيمه التي تملك كل مميزات الدوله السياحيه))

سؤال:


a (the ) beauty of Italy

هنا استبدلتيها بال التعريف مع انها الكلمه نكره جمال ايطاليا

that a great country

وهنا اضفتي a مع ان الجمله فيها ال التعريف

الدوله العظيمه

ممكن توضحيها وشكرا

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا lagend= اساطير من اسطوره yes i know this word but i didn't understnad it at first so if u have certain legends in ur mind that took place in this city so u can say : which has the beautiful legends بالعربي فيها الاساطير الجميله وبعدين تذكرين هذي الاساطير اش هي ترى في الجامعة لازم توثقين كلامك في كل شي but if u just heard that it has beautiful legends and u don't know them u may say : which has beautiful legends بالعربي فيها اساطير جميله وهي الاصح و الله اعلم In fact , I cannot forget that a great country which has advantages of the tourist country (i didn't understand this sentence , could u please explain it further , or say it in Arabic , so i can tell u what to say instead , ok)a. اقصد (أنني لا استطيع نسيان الدوله العظيمه التي تملك كل مميزات الدوله السياحيه)) look , here u use the word tourist andthis word is a noun not adjective سائح u want to say الدوله السياحيه then u can say : the touristic country touristic = adjective so u will say the advantages of the touristic country سؤال: a (the ) beauty of Italy هنا استبدلتيها بال التعريف مع انها الكلمه نكره جمال ايطاليا لا هنا كلمة ( جمال ايطاليا ) معرفة و كنا قد درسنا في اللغة العربية ان التعريف يكون بعدة طرق اما بإضافة ال التعريف او بالاضافة او اسماء العلم هنا جمال إيطاليا معرف بالاضافة فقد حدد الجمال انه لإيطاليا بغض النظر عن ان ال التعريف لم تظهر في اللغة العربية في اللغة الانقليزية يتم التعريف ب the والكثير الكثير من ادوات التعريف الاخرى لكن لو اردتى ان تقولي كلمة جمال بالنكرة هنا لا يمكنك ان تضعي a في البداية لان كلمة جمال من الكلمات المجردة وليس المعنوية وتعامل معاملة الكلمات الغير معدودة مثلاً u can say the milk but u can't say a milk that a great country وهنا اضفتي a مع ان الجمله فيها ال التعريف الدوله العظيمه لا انا لم اضيف هذا الحرف , ارجعي لنصك الاصلي ستجدي انك انتي كتبته وحددته لك باللون الاحمر على انه خطأ لكن ربما كان ينبغي على ان احدده باللون الاصفر ممكن توضحيها وشكرا

thanx a lot my dear u make me feel that u care about my correction

i want u to be like that every time

God luck

[Conscientious]

of course عيون عليا

you are right , but we often use the present simple not the continuous

but if u are discribing a movement or an action that usually takes up long time , u can use the present continuous

like

it's raining

the birds seem singing

and so on

keep in ur mind that

the trees are green
is not in the present continuous

do u know that ?? if u want me to explain it further , i don't mind

[عيون عليا]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious of course عيون عليا you are right , but we often use the present simple not the continuous but if u are discribing a movement or an action that usually takes up long time , u can use the present continuous like it's raining the birds seem singing and so on keep in ur mind that the trees are green is not in the present continuous do u know that ?? if u want me to explain it further , i don't mind

Thank you sooooooooooooooo much

[رغد محمد]

Thank you Oyne Alia
Thank you Con sooooooooo much
dear can you correct my mistakes if that is ok with you
I like your teache soooo much dear
Keep going

[Suzi]

Have a fantastic Evevning for every one

I've just backed from prophet's mosque I spent tow days there

I wouldn't want to backed from it .in fact all the traces remind

you by great Messenger and how it was living in simple place

and now despite the expansion there is a crowed at

Al-Rawda

any way I hope from God to accept all my praying and

supplications and don't disappoint me

اللهم آميـــــــــــــــــــــــــــ,ن

C,Ya