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[الالماسي]

Ahmed came from the village to study at the King Abdul Aziz University, in the night before he went to the university he thought abut the difficulties that will faced, he imagined the long line of people want register in the university like him, in the morning he took his papers and headed to the university. in the gate of university "you can register from websit of the university" someone said that to him, then he went to the cafe of internet and visited the university websit and he asked the worker to register him in the university, while the worker Browse websit ahmed surprize when he discovers that all transactions will be an electronically without bothering to go to the University building.

هل ماكتب اعلاه يعتبر في عرف المصحح مقدمة لمقال عن موقع الجامعة

ماهي الاخطاء التي ارتكبها الالماسي وادت الى كارثة

اين مواطن الضعف لديه

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