ساعدوني بتصحيح الباراقراف

[Lily roses]

مرحبا انا اليوم جبت موضوع من تعبيري انا وحابه انزله هنا وانتو شوفو واي اظافه يحتاجها لا تبخلو علي انا متفائله كثير ومتحمسه للقسم عشان كذا ابغى انجح في اختبار القبول يله نبدا
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My Self
My name is MARAM.I am 21 years ago.I am studant in Univercity king abdulaziz.I finish the second tearm.I am smart,sensitive,kind and beatiful.My family are so good.I live with my father and mother.Ilike learn English.It is language age.I love it very much.I love English literature.My self that specialization.English couldnot difucalt but no easy.My favurate hoppy is swimming and writting

this is paragrave me please give which true or mistake