A new idea for new students in English section

[رغد محمد]

Today we will talk about our dream .
I wil give you severl questions to give you the help you express your dreams :
1_ What is your dream ?
2_How long have you dreamed ?
3_ Did you reached for a dream or the way you still?
4_Are you afreid that you can not make it?
If you want tel more It’s your page.
I want a lots of pepole here !!!!!
I’m waiting for you.

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Today we will talk about our dream . I wil give you severl questions to give you the help you express your dreams : 1_ What is your dream ? 2_How long have you dreamed ? 3_ Did you reached for a dream or the way you still? 4_Are you afreid that you can not make it? If you want tel more It’s your page. I want a lots of pepole here !!!!! I’m waiting for you.

good questions Raghad I think that


In fact me dreams are very simple


first question i thing my dream make agood relation with allah


because I have a lot of guilt and I pray to allh every time forgive my and make me agood man

next dream is reach a good future and when i die no body hate me
at this time i can see same dream are win

.
Ihave athor dream but I cannot say that here it is very Special in my life

4- .No iam not afraid I have trust in my self

iam sorry for my bad writing but you must accept me ^_*


thaaaaaaaaaaaank you raghad :)

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن good questions Raghad I think that In fact me dreams are very simple first question i thing my dream make agood relation with allah because I have a lot of guilt and I pray to allh every time forgive my and make me agood man next dream is reach a good future and when i die no body hate me at this time i can see same dream are win . Ihave athor dream but I cannot say that here it is very Special in my life 4- .No iam not afraid I have trust in my self iam sorry for my bad writing but you must accept me ^_* thaaaaaaaaaaaank you raghad :)

First,you are welcome
Second ,where are the red words?or you didn’t uesed ?
Third, I hope Allah make your dreams true .
Fourth,you have some mistakes such as:
In fact,my ....... you have to but a comma after the word
"In fact " such as For exmple, did you understood me
make a good relation with Allah I think the correct word is make a good relationship with Allah.
3_I pray to Allah every time to forgive me .

This is all what I know if someone see other errors are limited please .

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

[QUOTE=رغد محمد;2421245],you are welcome
Second ,where are the red words?or you didn’t uesed ?





hahahahahahah

so sorry Director

I will do that in the second time

I promise you lady

^_*

[حلاها زايد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Today we will talk about our dream . I wil give you severl questions to give you the help you express your dreams : 1_ What is your dream ? 2_How long have you dreamed ? 3_ Did you reached for a dream or the way you still? 4_Are you afreid that you can not make it? If you want tel more It’s your page. I want a lots of pepole here !!!!! I’m waiting for you.

wow your topic is wonderful always people love to talk about their dreams
i have alot of dreams but now i will tell you about the most important for me
my dream to complete bs and master degree and work in a good job to help my family to achieve their dream of buy a house i want to make every one in my family happy because when i see them happy this is my happiness also i want to keep part of my salary to charity
i wish anyone to correct my mistake
see you later

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة حلاها زايد wow your topic is wonderful always people love to talk about their dreams i have alot of dreams but now i will tell you about the most important for me my dream to complete bs and master degree and work in a good job to help my family to achieve their dream of buy a house i want to make every one in my family happy because when i see them happy this is my happiness also i want to keep part of my salary to charity i wish anyone to correct my mistake see you later

I thing that the best dream in all dreams of classmates
it is a noble goal

after to day you make my respect you than other time


I wish you success

[حلاها زايد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن I thing that the best dream in all dreams of classmates it is a noble goal after to day you make my respect you than other time I wish you success

thank you abdullah and your writing is wonderful masha'aAllah
and your job helps you to develop your language
try to exercise any word you learn in your job

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة حلاها زايد wow your topic is wonderful always people love to talk about their dreams i have alot of dreams but now i will tell you about the most important for me my dream to complete bs and master degree and work in a good job to help my family to achieve their dream of buy a house i want to make every one in my family happy because when i see them happy this is my happiness also i want to keep part of my salary to charity i wish anyone to correct my mistake see you later

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw your English is very good Masha’allah even better than me .Keep going my dear.

I have one note:
When you write the conscience (I) you should write it with a capital letter.
Allah bless you

[Conscientious]

Wonderful topic masha'aAllah

My dear parents , day after day , I feel that we are one soul which can be separated . Since I was a baby , and once I open my eyes, I found myself attaching to you . 20 years and more I have spend them with you under one roof , we spend happy and sad moments together .May Allah protect you for me and reward you for all the things that u have done for my sake ." I know that I can never ever pay for all the debts u lent me in my days ". May Allah gather us also in the Paradise with our prophet Muhammad peace be upon him

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious Wonderful topic masha'aAllah My dear parents , day after day , I feel that we are one soul which can be separated . Since I was a baby , and once I open my eyes, I found myself attaching to you . 20 years and more I have spend them with you under one roof , we spend happy and sad moments together .May Allah protect you for me and reward you for all the things that u have done for my sake ." I know that I can never ever pay for all the debts u lent me in my days ". May Allah gather us also in the Paradise with our prophet Muhammad peace be upon him

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw Your message is
beautiful ,and have a pure love .Allah protect them for you ,and protect all parents around the world Allah willing .
Thank you ,I learn alot from you my sister .