تعبير صغننننون صححولي هو بلييييز

[عيون عليا]

بللييييز بدي آراء من وصلوا لمراحل متقدمه في الانجليش من اجل الاستفاده العامه

وشكررررا لللجميع غريبه (مررررور كثير وردود قليله)

والموضوع سههههههل وصغير

[شذى الوادي]

My name is Alice. I have 23 years old. I’m marred and I have one daughter her name is joanne.
I want to speak about myself in the past and how I became a good mother and teacher at the same time .

When I was a student at secondary school. The playing and the enjoyment were my first goals ( u can say "first" but it's not obligatory , it's just a suggestion ) in the life .I was a lazy girl even at the end of the year and I continues in the failure of the road.(if u can just paraphrase it in different way so it could me more understandable for I didn't got u well in this point )

In one day( usually they say "once " instead of this phrase or u could say "someday " but maybe your phrase is right , I don't know ,I'm just telling u the common usage ) I met an amazing person. She could change the inside of myself (u can say “my inner self “ I think it would be better ). In that time I have feeling ( u should use “felt” because after “have” we use the past participle tens ) in myself that I’m a new human ( “person” must be better ).
Thanks for my spiritual mother because of her now I have a goal in the life.( u could say “in my life” or “in life” without “the” because life is life u don’t have to put an article )
I put a plan for my future.
I studded very hard even to (be) able to enter the section (usually , we use department instead of section and we use section for Alshu3ab Al-derasea ) that I love.

Then I passed ( I think if u would say “went through” it would be better coz pass has another usage , pass=Ejtazt in Arabic ) a new life, marriage, pregnancy and childbirth. After that I worked on myself even( till) made my second goal of Equilibrium (to balance ) between my family life and my study. Price be to god I graduated from the department of English( the English department ).
Now after I worked very hard and studded by all my energies. I got my lovely job.

Finally, I made my main goal (teaching assistant in the department of English).i’m not sure of the last sentence which is between parenthesis

If u don’t understand any thing ask me please

Best wishes

[ام ريتال الحربى]

الله يوفقك
والله يوفقني لانو انا مبتدئه انتى عندي فلته
ههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههه

[عيون عليا]

الله يعطيك العافيه يا شذى الوادي بجد اسعدني تواجدك وتصحيحك للتعبير
وملاحظاتك جداااا رائعه ماشاء الله
ماراح استغنى عنك في المررررات الجايه وشكرااااا
بس سؤال /كم تدي التعبير من 10 ؟ مع الاخذ في الاعتبار اني تحضيري

تحياتي

[عيون عليا]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ام ريتال الحربى الله يوفقك والله يوفقني لانو انا مبتدئه انتى عندي فلته ههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههه

هلا والله ام ريتال اللهم آآآميييين يارب يوفقنا جميعا

ويحقق لك امالك

وشكرا على المجامله اللطيفه