محتاجه ارائكم وتصحيحكم ....

[maroooma]

تسلم اخوي ان شاءالله لمن راح اتدرب على الايسي راح استفيد من نصايحك الادوات هادي خلت البراقراف شوي جدي

[Charismatic]

Sorry but I think there is one grammar mistake
when you said I changed from gril to ,

I think you should say from a girl to


Have a good one