ممكن تصححوا لي تعبيري

[مريومه2]

السلام عليكم انا بكره عندي اختبار انجليزي رايتنق عن وصف شخص وابغى اعرف الاخطاء وتصحيحها وادا عندكم زياده عليه
MY uncle
I would like discuss my uncle his name‘s Ali . He is married and he has two daughter and one son thier names Haleema and Fatimah and Ahmmad . He lives in Jeddah near my hose .He has black and curly hair larg and blue eyes also he has kind ,friendly and ovel face like his father and white skin.
he is very kind and beautiful Ilove he because he has nice characher . And he is reliable so if I have some problem he is help me. Also he is not like talkative so he calm and some times good moody .He is generous so he is love help need people and poor ,if he come to my house he is gave me gift.
however , he has some adjectives are not good for example, he is stupid so he does not go to university and he cant pass moth exam,and he is not like meeting many of people he is shy also sensitive.

[مريومه2]

19 مشاهده ولا رد على الاقل قولوا صح اولا عندي اختبار باداكره بس ماني متاكده ساعدوني

[ساري ياغرام]

The most important relative of me is my uncle.His name is Ali . He is married and he has two daughters and a son. Thier names are Haleema,Fatimah and Ahmmad . He lives in Jeddah close to my house .He has black curly hair.He also has beautiful blue eyes.He is very kind and friendly. He looks like his father with white skin.
He is very handsome.In fact my uncle is reliable so if I have some problems i find him really agreat person to talk to.He is not like talkative people that is why I trust him always .He is generous and loves to help poor people.
هذا الي قدرت اصححة قبل ماانام واتمنى الي عنده وقت يكمل التصحيح

[Dmar]

He also has beautiful blue eyes

ايه هين عيون زرقاء ههه

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