الرايتنج مجنني

[رغد محمد]

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!!!!....Finally

I found someone who can correct my mistakes

Thank you so so so so much Mr. Fahad. Really I appreciate your hard work to correct my mistakes

You don't know how happy I'm. Now I know where my mistakes are.

?...May I ask you a Qs

?...How is my writing in general

?...Does it need to more and more to be professional

?...What is your advice to me

:and more one Q

:In my essay, I wrote

One benefit of the internet is doing homework, researching, or looking for information. For example, some people went to the internet to look for specific information, and they can find it easily.

:and you correct it to be

Other benefits of the internet are such as doing homework, researching, or looking for information. For example, some people use to the internet to look for specific information, and they can find it easily.

?...The red colors: why did you change the beginning to Others Coz it is the beginning of the paragraph and it is the first sentence of the essay

So, how can we say Others..? "And" the internet are such

I think we have to use a verb right

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:and in this one too

. Also, when you want to communicate with your family, especially for who travails out of his country to learn or live there, you can use the internet.

:You change it too

Also, when you want to communicate with your family, especially those who away from his country to learn or live there, they can use the internet

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Ok... can we change his to their or not ...?? Coz you didn't correct it for me

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Again thank you for your time and correction, too

Thank you from my heart

Raghad Mohammed

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