also , I need your opinion

[هدددددء]

Saher

In these days, there are new systems that useful of us . all of us agree that saher system one of these useful systems. In this essay, I will explain how does saher and what are the positive results of it .
Saher system acts smart way because it is use technology and few persons .This system works put cameras in roads, which in turn photographing cars that violate traffic regulation then send their information to system center, which in turn will record violations on violators. In addition, there are few employees in saher because this system need one person in its car and small group work in the system center. Therefore, I advise the drivers follow regulation traffic to void saher fines .
To Saher there are many positive results because it is reduce rate traffic accidents and maintains public properties. Reports indicate that rate of accidents traffic after saher work deceased 45 percent. Moreover this system maintains public properties because it reduced rate of accidents, which harmful to street and public assets , consequently, we should admit that saher has achieved good results of our society.
In conclusion, saher is smart system and achieve a lot positive result of us . but, I recommends the government to be activated more and more .

[saadoony]

in its car = does this make any sense
void you mean avoid

If I'm your Instructor and you write this in the final exam I'll give 55 out of 55 so keep hard working however , we know that Saher is trickery System but it's better to write it in this way to get full mark and that's what you looking for finally good luck and I hope that Saher vanish

[nour al3mr]

حيـاك أخي

ملاحظـات سريعة و بسيطـة

there are new systems that useful of us . all of us agree that saher system one of these useful systems.

- علامات الترقيم تكون ملاصقة لآخــــــــر حرف بعدها يترك مسافة حرف وآحد ثم تبدأ الكتابة للجملة الجديدة

- بعد علامة الترقيم [النقطـة / الاستفهام / التعجب] يكون الحرف الأول كبيــر capital

- التكرار في الجمـــــل يحسب خطـأ repetition

Saher system acts smart way

in a smart way

it is use

it uses or you can say it is using
present simple / present continuous

This system works put cameras

works by putting

لانه لايمكن يأتي فعلين رئيسيين خلف بعض في المصـدر

this system need

الفعل يآخذ s لان الفاعل مفـرد needs

I advise the drivers follow

برضوهـ فعلين خلف بعض
الفعل الثاني تقدر تلحقه بصيغة المصدر to follow

it is reduce

it reduces or it is reducing

saher is smart system and achieve

achived لو كنت بتعامل الجملة على ان محتواها صفات adjectives
بحيث يصير smart a/ achieved كلهم بصيغة الصفـة

وممكن تخلي كلمة achieves على انها فعل بحيث تضع بعد أداة الربط and it achieves

بالتوفيق

[هدددددء]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة saadoony in its car = does this make any sense void you mean avoid If I'm your Instructor and you write this in the final exam I'll give 55 out of 55 so keep hard working however , we know that Saher is trickery System but it's better to write it in this way to get full mark and that's what you looking for finally good luck and I hope that Saher vanish

Nice to give me your opinion
Thank you

[هدددددء]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة nour al3mr حيـاك أخي ملاحظـات سريعة و بسيطـة - علامات الترقيم تكون ملاصقة لآخــــــــر حرف بعدها يترك مسافة حرف وآحد ثم تبدأ الكتابة للجملة الجديدة - بعد علامة الترقيم [النقطـة / الاستفهام / التعجب] يكون الحرف الأول كبيــر capital - التكرار في الجمـــــل يحسب خطـأ repetition in a smart way it uses or you can say it is using present simple / present continuous works by putting لانه لايمكن يأتي فعلين رئيسيين خلف بعض في المصـدر الفعل يآخذ s لان الفاعل مفـرد needs برضوهـ فعلين خلف بعض الفعل الثاني تقدر تلحقه بصيغة المصدر to follow it reduces or it is reducing achived لو كنت بتعامل الجملة على ان محتواها صفات adjectives بحيث يصير smart a/ achieved كلهم بصيغة الصفـة وممكن تخلي كلمة achieves على انها فعل بحيث تضع بعد أداة الربط and it achieves بالتوفيق

I advise the drivers follow
noun=drivers=السائقين

Anyway, nice to give me your opinion
Thank you

[nour al3mr]

آهـلاً أخي

I advise the drivers follow

الفعـــل advise يتضمن بعدهـ ملحقيـن مفعول به أول و [جملة فعلية] ليتم معناهـ

لذلك follow تحول لصيغة المصدر بوضع to

موفق

[قيس77]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة هدددددء Saher In these days, there are new systems that useful for us . All of us agree that saher system one of these useful systems. In this essay, I will explain how does Saher and what are the positive results of it . Saher system acts in smart way because it uses technology and few persons .They put cameras in roads, which in turn photographing cars that violate traffic regulation then send their information to system center, which in turn will record violations on violators. In addition, there are few employees in Saher because this system needs one person in its car and small group work in the system center. Therefore, I advise the drivers to follow regulation traffic to avoid Saher fines . To Saher there are many positive results because it reduces rate of traffic accidents and maintains public properties. Reports indicate that rate of accidents traffic after Saher work, deceased 45 percent. Moreover, this system maintains public properties because it reduced rate of accidents, which harmful to street and public assets , consequently, we should admit that saher has achieved good results of our society. In conclusion,Saher is smart system and it achieves a lot positive result of us . but, I recommend the government to be activated more and more .

any way I hope for you to get full mark.

[هدددددء]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة nour al3mr آهـلاً أخي الفعـــل advise يتضمن بعدهـ ملحقيـن مفعول به أول و [جملة فعلية] ليتم معناهـ لذلك follow تحول لصيغة المصدر بوضع to موفق

شكرا لك نور العمر
فعلا معاك حق

شكرا لاعطائي جزء من وقتك

[هدددددء]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة قيس77 any way i hope for you to get full mark.

شكرا لك
انا ايضا اتمنى لك كل التوفيق

[Brilliant Shores]

Saher

These days, there are new systems that useful for citizens. All of us agree that saher system one of these useful systems. In this essay, I will explain how does saher work and what are the positive results of it.

Saher system acts smartly because it uses technology and few persons .This system works by putting cameras in roads, which in turn photographing cars that violate traffic regulation. Then it sends their information to system center, which in turn will record violations on violators. In addition, there are few employees in saher because this system need one person in its car and small group work in the system center. Therefore, I advise the drivers to follow regulation traffic to avoid saher fines.

There are many helpful results, because it reduces rate traffic accidents and maintains public properties. Reports indicate that rate of accidents traffic decreased nearly forty five percent after had saher system. Moreover this system maintains public properties, because it reduced rate of accidents, which harmful to street and public assets , consequently, we should admit that saher has achieved good results for our society.

In conclusion, saher is a smart system and achieved a lot of helpful results. Although, I recommends the government to activate

more and more.

this is your essay after editing

best of luck