كيف نجيب 10/10 في ال writing واحنا واثقين؟ ( مهم )

[Dr.Passed]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rano00nah هههههههههههههه يعني ينآسسسو =$ بس أحلى لمن تقولي ينآآطططو جربي قوليهآ << اطلعي برآ

ههههه مره ضحكتيني طبعا لأ يا ناسسو احلا واخف ;)

[Dr.Passed]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة azo0oz 111 صااااادقه بالنسبه لجزيئيه e و i دايم الخبط مدري استخدم e or i بس تقرييبا فهمت انا اجرب بالنطق اذا تنمد شوي قريبه لل a هذي راح تكووون e والثانيه مافيها مد يعطيكي العااافيه وا ن شاء الله دكتوووره بأذن الله وادعيلي ابدع بالرايتنق الثااني وا ن شاء الله ما اغللللط بالتووووفيق للجميع

انركز على النقاط الي قلناها وطبقها دحين...طلع اي موضوع وابدأ اكتب عشان يدك تاخود على الكتابه وانت انشاءالله محاتنقص...بالتوفيق

[محمد عماد]

جزاك الله خير Dr.Passed
مبادرة طيبة منك
وان شاء الله يستفيدو الشبااب من النصائح المقدمة
وفي ميزان حسناتك ان شاء الله


بس عندي ملاحظة بسيطة ::
انا لاحظت انو اغلب الأعضاء في المنتدى ما يبغو نصائح وتعليمات عن كيفية كتابة الwriting
هما يبغو براجرافات جاهزة وصحيحة ... وهم بس يحفظو

اكاد اجزم بانه 80 % من الطلاب يعرفو هذي النصائح ... وهذا الشيء لاحظته في كلاسات الإنجلش لما الدكتور يسوي مراجعة قبل الإختبار
تلاقي كل الطلاب عارفين المسافة البادئة ، والكابيتال ليتر ، وكيفية تقسيم البراجراف ، وكتابة رؤوس اقلام قبل البداية في الكتابة ، وغيرها
لكن عند الإختبار تلاقيهم يخطؤوا فيها ... لماذا ؟؟ لا اعرف

بالــتـــوفـــيـــق

[Dr.Passed]

د. ريال :

أنا عارفة انو كتير عارف النقاط دي بس بينسو امكن يطبقةها..

كلامك صحيح برضهم بيخطئو عشان "القرامر" و ال "سبيلينق" ...القرارمر الي بياخدو في الكلاس ( نفس المنهج) ابدا ما بيطبقو بطريقة صحيحة في كتاباتهم للأسف....والسبيلينق ازمة الكتير ولو انو يعني سهل جدا وبرضو ليلو قواعد خاصة بي ( لدرجة انو الواحد ممكن مايغلط حتى لو اول مرة يكتب الكلمة) بس نرجع نقول المنهج المنهج المنهج.....

[Dr.Passed]

!!!Uppp
مافي احد عندو مواضيع يبغى يحطها؟؟

[محمد عماد]

can you check this essay , please ?


Advantages and disadvantages of living in a city and in the countryside

A lot of people decide to move to the countryside nowadays. However, there are still many people who prefer stay in the town and say that they couldn't live anywhere else. So which place is better to live? Let's think about both of them.
I would like to start with the advantages and disadvantages of the big city life. Living in such a big city has a lot of advantages. There is a big offer how to spend free time. There are a lot of theatres, concerts and other ways of entertainment. There is always a lot to do and visit! There are a lot of possibilities of shopping. In various shopping centers and galleries you can buy whatever you want. What is more, there are a lot of working places in a city. Many big international companies have their locations in the cities, so it is much easier to find a job in a big city. Moreover, the public transport is developed quite well, so the commuting to work isn't a problem. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of living in a big city. Cities are very crowded. Everywhere there are crowds: on the pavements and in the buses. What is more, the traffic is heavy and city's car parks are always very full. Sometimes it is very difficult to get from a given place to another. It may take hours! Moreover, the other disadvantage is the safety in a city, but actually the lack of safety. There is a big crime rates in cities. So you have to be very careful at nights when you leave your home.
I think that in the country the problem of crime isn't so big. There aren't so many people and they usually know each other well. The possibility of robbery or other crime is relatively lower. Life in the countryside is more peaceful and the life is also slower. What is more, it is less stressful. There isn't any time pressure and the traffic conditions are better. A lot of places you may reach on foot.


The city offers a lot: there are huge buildings, skyscrapers or some historic monuments. On the other hand, in the countryside there are a lot of breathtaking sceneries, space and other amazing places such as forests, lakes or mountains. Moreover, people in the countryside are quite different than people living in the city: they are relaxed, friendly and family-oriented. People in the city are like ants. They are always in hurry, busy and out of time. In the country people enjoy lives and take pleasure in their daily activities. As a disadvantage of living in the countryside we may consider the commuting problems. People who stay in the countryside often have to work in the nearest cities, so it may take a lot of time to get to it. However, the living costs in the country are much lower, the variety of products in shops is smaller.


To sum up I would like to say that both countryside and city have some advantages and disadvantages. Both city and country may be a good place to live. However I will stay in the city till I retire. Then I would like to move to the country to have a rest. I think that everyone of us will take into consideration all aspects before he decides to move to the country

[Dr.Passed]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ريال سعودي A lot of people decide to move to the countryside nowadays. However, there are still many people who prefer staying in town and say that they cannot live anywhere else. So which place is better to live in? Let's think about both of them. Living in such a big city has a lot of advantages. There are multiple choices for spending time. There are a lot of theatres, concerts and other ways of entertainment. There is always a lot to do and places to visit! There are multiple varieties in shopping malls. Further more, big cities have a bigger capacity for employment. Many big international companies are located in the city, therefore, finding a job in the city is much easier. Moreover, the public transport is developed quite well, so transportation is not a problem. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of living in a big city. Cities are very crowded, traffic and car parkings are condensed almost all the time. Sometimes it is very difficult to move from a place to another, it may take hours! In addition to the disadvantages, cities are not quite safe, one has to be cautious especially after dark. Countries are kind of the opposite, the crime rate is much lower than cities due to the small population . The possibility of robbery or other crime is relatively lower. so Life in the countryside is more peaceful and less stressful. The city offers a lot, there are huge buildings, skyscrapers or some historic monuments. On the other hand, in the countryside there are a lot of breathtaking sceneries, space and other amazing places such as forests, lakes and mountains. people in the countryside are quite different than people living in the city, they are relaxed, friendly and family-oriented. People in the city are like ants. They are always in hurry, busy and out of time. In the country people enjoy life. As a disadvantage of living in the countryside we may consider the commuting problems. People who stay in the countryside often have to work in the nearest cities, so it may take a lot of time to get there ,also, the living costs in the country are much lower, the variety of products in shops is smaller. Finally, I would like to say that both the city and countryside may be a good place to live in. As for me, I will stay in the city till I retire, then I will move to the country to rest. I think that everyone will take all aspects into consideration before they decide to move to the country.

All done
خلاص زبطو وكلي حاجة بس ابغى اقولك على حاجة...
"What is more " ماتنقال ابدا بأي صيغة من الصيغ ابدا ابدا ابدا..
واضح انك بالترجم موضوعك ترجة حرفية من العربي..

الجمل الي غيرتها فتعديلي غيرتها لأنها ما تركب..( الصيغة كانت حرفية وخاطئة) عشان كده...

[خطة أ]

الرايتينج كان اسوأ شيء عندي

يعني بعض الاحيان الكويز يكون ساعة وثلث

تمر ساعة والورقة فاضية

في الثلث ساعة الاخيرة اعبي الورقة بكلام كثير وخليه يتعب في التصحيح خخخخخ

[Dr.Passed]

طيب فين المشكلة في رأيك..كيف تعالج المشكلة؟ فين المشكلة عندك بالزبط؟

[محمد عماد]

يعطيكِ العافية دكتورة بيسد

طيب ممكن تراجعي لي هذي القطعة لانو واحد من اصحابي طلبها مني

My favorite food is a famous Chinese dish called instant- boiled mutton .


To make this dish, you need a hot pot, a special compound seasoning, thin mutton slices, fish balls, beef balls, and vegetables . The seasoning sauce is essential for the course; its ingredients are sugar, sesame oil, soy sauce, gourmet powder, vinegar and chili sauce. Because it contains so many different condiments, you can find many flavors —sweet , salty, sour, and piquancy, The color is usually brown or crimson, depending on the amount of the chili sauce .
Once the seasoning sauce is set, the process in making instant- boiled mutton has begun . First of all, one should fill the hot pot with water, and heat it up. When the water boils, put in mutton slices , fish balls and beef balls as well as vegetables, such as Napa cabbages, spinach's, mushrooms and tofu. Once the color of the mutton turns from blood-red to light red, it's ready. Pick the meat and vegetables up with the chopsticks into the bowl of seasoning sauce, dip them in the sauce fully and enjoy .
In China, the instant-boiled mutton does not only mean a meal; eating it serves as a big family , social event. The large hot pot enables many people to sit around and eat together, offering a valuable and harmonious opportunity for family , friend reunion. That is why most Chinese people, as hospitable and interdependent they are love this dish .