تصحيح التعبير انقلش ليفل 3

[بنت الشرفية]

السلام عليكم


انا ليفل 3 وكتبت هزا التعبير هل صحيح وفي اخطاء ولالا ؟؟؟



I was 9 years old when I went to Egypt with my family. The flight was very bumpy due to bad weather. I was sick many times. We checked into a hotel after landing. However the room was very small and stuffy. We asked for a bigger room ,but there were no rooms available. The next day we went to the pyramids . I felt so dizzy in the narrow, airless , dark , tomb. Then we went to the museum. There were statues of sphinx everywhere. I looked at the mummies in the glass cases in fear. After a while when I looked back, I could not see my parents. I was lost . I called out to my parents many times and stared crying. Other tourists took me to a policeman. He asked me where we were staying ,but I could not recollect the name of the hotel. finally, the policeman took me to the embassy of Saudi Arabia . the officers asked me for my parents names and telephone number. After a few time, while I was waiting my parents came and took me to the hotel . we went back to Jeddah the next morning. It was the worst
holiday of my life.