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[Learner1]

It's really excellent as a beginner. With more practice, I guarantee you an amazing writing skill.

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In our life, we see a lot of poor people, maybe we say oh this is a sad thing; but why we dont offer them anything..
Why we dont say any kind words or sit with them.
There is one answer I can say to you.
Because we are poor, yes poor, we are without feeling, without mercy, yes we are poor.
At the end I just want to ask you, imagine if you were in this situation, what could you do ?

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Good luck & Keep up the good job