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يالله بسم الله
طبعا بداية (Bergrave ) بعد التصحيح من ماي نانا صارت pargragh كيف فاتتني هذه
اكيد فيه مسافة بس ماتنكتب هنا الظاهر مديرنا سكاو راحت عليه
Watson And The Shark
The scense in watson and the huge Shark .Watson was swimming in the sea when the huge Shark attaked. It bit his leg, but he did not die.He was trying to swim again to reach to asmall ship.It has agroup of people.Some of them were looking to the huge Shark under the water, they were afraid and scare , but two men of them were brave . They tried to give ahelping hand .aman wich was standing on front of the ship was stare and waiting to kill the Shark. Wastson could finally hold their hands .He still alive with one leg untill now.
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