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[wejdo_o]

مساء / صباح .. الخير ..

لو سمحتوا ابغى مساعدتكم في هذا البرجراف

Last Holiday

Last holiday was exciting. We traveld to Dammam By plane . We stayed two weeks in a hotel in Khubar .In Khubar there are a big malls . We went shopping and we went to see the sea . We visited my uncle also . We enjoyed this holiday very much

1/ صححوا الاخطاء
2/ لو عندكم جمل زيادة تنفع حطوها
3/ هذي ما صارت مساعده صارت اختبار خخ .....

[maryam.n]

Last holiday was exciting. We traveld to Dammam By plane . We stayed two weeks in a hotel in Khubar .In Khubar there are a big malls . We went shopping and we went to see the sea . We visited my uncle also . We enjoyed this holiday very much
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I wrote this , but I know that I have many mistakes (at less i tried )
.. so that's what in my mind for now :)

My last holiday was so excited It was the first time to travel to Dammam.First, we satyed there for two weeks in a big and beautiful hotel .Second, we swa alot of malls which were huge and includes many brands ,So we went shopping . Then we went to see the beach and it was very clean .After all , I had so much fun and I hope to visite it again .

[سبحانك ربـي]

[QUOTE=wejdo_o;4803181]

مساء / صباح .. الخير ..

لو سمحتوا ابغى مساعدتكم في هذا البرجراف

My last Holiday

My last holiday was exciting. I traveld with my family to Dammam By plane . We stayed there for two weeks in a hotel in Khubar.In Khubar there are a big malls so we went to shopping alot.Me and my family went to the sea . My uncle live in AlKhobar because of that we did not forget to visit him . Finally we enjoyed this holiday and that was avery nice holiday in my life at the moment

ها ياحلوة ان شالله بس يكون عجبك يلا بالتوفيق بس أول وآخر مرة
أنا لفل 2 شكلك انتي كمان لأنو عندي نفس الموضوع بس والله لسا ماعملتو قلت أساعدك وبعدينا أنا أحل تبعي
يلا بااااااي تصبحي على خير

[Astronomer1]

اتوقع الاماكن المعروفه مثل hotel مايجي معاها a يجي قبلها the

كمان a ماتجي الا مع المفرد مو بالجمع there are a big malls

By في الجمله الثانية ماتكون بالكابتيل ليتر يعني تصير by plane

وماحطيت نقطة باخر القطعه

ان شاء الله اجاباتي صحيحة !

[Optimistic Sona]

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Our last holiday was exciting

we stayed in a hotel in Khubar for two weeks . There are
...... big malls , beautiful beach and
حاولي تسوي تعداد هنا

We went to the beach and enjoy our time there


.actually, this holiday was very enjoyable to us


معليش كتبتها مفصلة بس عشان بسرعة
ان شاء الله أكون أفدتك :)

[Optimistic Sona]

^


ماشاء الله ع بال كتبت مشاركتي
جات الردود خخخخ
صار ردي مالو داعي خخخخخ

[Astronomer1]

اول خطأ اكتشفته we went shopping مايجي بعد went اي اضافات يعني تصير we ent to shop

اتوقع كمان الاماكن المعروفه مثل hotel مايجي معاها a يجي قبلها the

كمان a ماتجي الا مع المفرد مو بالجمع there are a big malls

By في الجمله الثانية ماتكون بالكابتيل ليتر يعني تصير by plane

ان شاء الله اجاباتي صحيحة !

وماحطيت نقطة باخر القطعه

[wejdo_o]

الله يعطيكم الف عافيــــه استفدت منكم
بالتـــــوفيــق للجميـــــع

[بسمة غلا]

بالتوفيقـ

[لولو الشهري]

لاااازم تكوون الافعال في التصرررريف المااضي لانه حصل هذا الشي من زمان