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Smoking

There are many bad habits in our society . All of us agree that smoking one of these habits because we are see effect it on smokers and society . I will explain effect it on our health and our economic .
Smoking effects on our health because it causes cancer and lung disease . Many smoker suffer from cancer , where research has proven that smoking causes cancer , which in turn lead to death. Besides the doctors say that most of patients who visit them are smokers . Therefore, I would advise smokers to quit smoking .
Smoking effects on our economic because smokers spend a lot of money to get cigarettes and the cigarette companies raise prices . Economic reports indicate that the smoker spends about 25 percent of his income for smoking . In addition , cigarette companies raise prices . A pack of cigarette was sold 1 dollars , now sells 3 dollars .
In conclusion , smoking is bad habit effects on us.