21-02-2010, 12:07 AM
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تاريخ التسجيل: Apr 2009
التخصص: لغات اوروبيه
نوع الدراسة: إنتساب
المستوى: متخرج
الجنس: أنثى
المشاركات: 1,741
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رد: Workshop
Firstly, I would say that your sentence is perfectly shaped and no mistakes on it either grammatical or spelling
but
I recommend you to exchange leave to (to get rid of) this phrase is used to such these cases.. I heard it nearly everyday when I were in England. It might be not formal or academic.
anyways, the sentence will be as followed
I hope that I can leave my fear so I can learn well
I wish if I can get rid of my fear, so I will learn very well
Damn, hhh I've changed the whole thing lool.. sorry, I just rewrite it in my way. never worry, ur sentence is totally true
please, correct me as well !!
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First, I like your style
Second, I think both sentences are true
but I,m not sure about will
third, correct me
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