[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبير العسيري I hope that I can leave my fear so I can learn well correct me

Firstly, I would say that your sentence is perfectly shaped and no mistakes on it either grammatical or spelling
but
I recommend you to exchange leave to (to get rid of) this phrase is used to such these cases.. I heard it nearly everyday when I were in England. It might be not formal or academic.
anyways, the sentence will be as followed

I hope that I can leave my fear so I can learn well

I wish if I can get rid of my fear, so I will learn very well

Damn, hhh I've changed the whole thing lool.. sorry, I just rewrite it in my way. never worry, ur sentence is totally true

please, correct me as well !!