05-07-2008, 01:03 AM
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تاريخ التسجيل: Jun 2008
نوع الدراسة: إنتظام
الجنس: أنثى
المشاركات: 989
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good Masha'a Allah you finished early
excuse me brother I am not a profissional to judge your writing, but as a beginner in writing
I will say some tips that fit with me
you wrote just three paragragh, but the true essay should has four or five paragragh
so, try to write the fourth paragraph
also, do you know Microsoft Office???
it is a great programme that correct our mistakes in writing either spelling or fragments
it is important to write your essay on that programme especially now because we don't have a teacher who can correct what we write
At the end, do not forget to rewrite the essays on the first page of this thread, for they will help you more
All the best to the all
JS
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اللهم إنـك عفوٌ تحب العفو فاعـفُ عنّـا
Life becomes precious and more special to us when we look for the little everyday miracles and get
excited about the privileges of simply being human
Told By :
Tim Hansel
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