10-07-2010, 12:49 PM
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تاريخ التسجيل: Apr 2010
كلية: كلية الآداب والعلوم الانسانية فرع كليات البنات
التخصص: !!*English*!!
نوع الدراسة: إنتظام
المستوى: متخرج
البلد: جــــدة
الجنس: أنثى
المشاركات: 6,426
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رد: A new idea for a new students in English section
good questions Raghad I think that
In fact me dreams are very simple
first question i thing my dream make agood relation with allah
because I have a lot of guilt and I pray to allh every time forgive my and make me agood man
next dream is reach a good future and when i die no body hate me
at this time i can see same dream are win
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Ihave athor dream but I cannot say that here it is very Special in my life
4- .No iam not afraid I have trust in my self
iam sorry for my bad writing but you must accept me ^_*
thaaaaaaaaaaaank you raghad :)
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First,you are welcome
Second ,where are the red words?or you didn’t uesed ?
Third, I hope Allah make your dreams true .
Fourth,you have some mistakes such as:
In fact,my ....... you have to but a comma after the word
"In fact " such as For exmple, did you understood me
make a good relation with Allah I think the correct word is make a good relationship with Allah.
3_I pray to Allah every time to forgive me .
This is all what I know if someone see other errors are limited please .
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رَبَّآه , إنِّي وَكَّلتُ أمْرِي إليك وَ أسْلَمتُ قلبِي لَك , وَ فوَّضَتُ رُوحِي إليك , فَـ كُنْ مَعِي يَـ رَحْمَن وَ أغْدِقنِي رَحْمَةً وَ بَرَكَة. .
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