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قديم 11-07-2010, 09:12 PM   #73

رغد محمد

الصورة الرمزية رغد محمد

 
تاريخ التسجيل: Apr 2010
كلية: كلية الآداب والعلوم الانسانية فرع كليات البنات
التخصص: !!*English*!!
نوع الدراسة: إنتظام
المستوى: متخرج
البلد: جــــدة
الجنس: أنثى
المشاركات: 6,426
افتراضي رد: A new idea for a new students in English section

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رجلُ من سفَر مشاهدة المشاركة
Peace and mercy upon you

I thank you brother for this amazing topic

Let me apologize for the punctuation problem in this forum

And welcome all our friends in this section

Actually I have no idea what I will tell you in this reply

But I am in habit of writing about my feelings, my fear, and

my memories

So, here I am trying to write about "the journey of the hope"

………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
Like a yellow ear that dance with the wind next to the sunset

He sat there, with his foot dangle above the ocean, and asked

the ocean

How many ship didn't arrive and won't arrive

Gave a long gaze at the sky and said
:
When I was a child, I idolize this live
,
I was laden with pink dreams

I searched in all places for my existence, lies
,
And my voice that went and wasn't echoed back

Everybody in this live will get handful of dreams or lies

And take them with him everywhere

then disappear in an abandoned lane

later, the lane will echo with his shouts
:
Where am I
?
They told me that I can do it

They said I will survive

Then he will calm

And walk three steps towards
,
Then guess what .. ! he will get out from his dark lane

And find himself here, on this stranger beach

Oooooooooooooh ocean

Were we all under the illusion

Which secret are you keep from us

Why were we all limping when we cross the abandoned lanes

Is it our fate, choice, kindness

That lead us to this dead end lanes…again and again

Should we be haggled even for our dreams

and now you have a great chance to lament yourself, and let

your memories hang over the ocean

The old man turn round with his back to the ocean and leave

his footprint on the beach

These footprint won't fade away ….ever … ever

الشكر لصاحب الموضوع مع ملاحظة أن حرف التنكير الذي سبق New students غير صحيح لانتفائه بالجمع

تحية,
I’ve been waiting for you for long ..long time age .
O my Allah..your words ,wonderful,and more than that .It’s beautiful story.
Allah bless you ,and masha’allah there is no any mistake. you are unique in your type of writing. Please be here always,and give us your advise .
Thank you my big brother
Note ,where the red words or you didn’t use one.
your sister ,Raghad

 

توقيع رغد محمد  

 

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رَبَّآه ,
إنِّي وَكَّلتُ أمْرِي إليك وَ أسْلَمتُ قلبِي لَك , وَ فوَّضَتُ رُوحِي إليك ,
فَـ كُنْ مَعِي يَـ رَحْمَن وَ أغْدِقنِي رَحْمَةً وَ بَرَكَة.
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التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة رغد محمد ; 11-07-2010 الساعة 09:28 PM.
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