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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة nooni A-give a suitable title for the story Love,sucess,wealth to be frank with u the title should be like a phrase and ont sparate words ,ok B-what is the message that you got from the story (explain in one paragraph ) life with love is a wonderful life. It makes our life happy. If it enters in our life, every nice thing well enter with it as success and wealth good message that u got ,but i wished that it was a paragraph , u know this question espacially u can write expandly coz it's not limited to a certain thing , i hope u the best in the next story C-describe each one of characters (husband, wife and daughter-in-law ) try to make it in one paragraph whereas there is a coherence between them In my opinion, all three characters in these story there nature effect in there thinking. First character the husband. He chooses a wealth as any father. He likes his family to live in wealth. Second the wife, she chooses success because she likes to see her family live in success. Also, she is generous woman because when she saw the three men in front in her yard she asks them to come in her house to give them something to eat. Third character, the daughter-in-law. She chooses love and thinks it is better for them. Also, she is in her early age.

ur paragraph is so nice and u described the characters well

ur mistakes are not worth mentioning but i would prefer to tell u just in case

these) for plural and story is singlar

wealth and not (a wealth )coz it's uncountable noun

the third is u only have to put (a) before (generous wonam)coz it's singlar and a countable noun

good luck