[رغد محمد]

،’

This is my correction of your essay

،’

Let me thank you coz I see lots of progress in your writing skills

Masha'allah Tabark'allah you are getting better and better in writing Mr.Ahmad

Please keep trying and trying coz you are a very good learner and don't listen to anyone who think that you are not good enough

What you wrote was amazing ... Good structure ... Good grammar .. Good spelling .. Really .. you are very good

Keep working in you writing

،’