[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious Miss i think if u details ur main ideas , u will be the winner coz u don't have many mistakes masha'a Allah but also i'm not sure that u will avoid Run-on or fragment coz ur essay was short and i don't know how it will be if it's long one

con you know i was struggleing to find ideas with the details and in a moment i wanted to change the topic but i was busy and there is no time to choose something else
but in shaa Allah next time if we do this again i will impress you guys