wooow Tell Me Why
I lovwe this song soOo much but I had never decided to translate it 
 
 
Ms.Fabulous
u did very good ..
but let me tell u sth
at the first sentence ,, it's better to start the Arabic word with n like what u did (الأطفال يغنون) 
but I think in this case
(يغني الأطفآل أغنية لكل فتىً وفتآهـ )sounds better
the next I think 
حيث زرقة السمآء وخضرهـ الحقول .... better
 
the next .. so nice 
and mine is 
عندهــآ أستيقضتـ .. وكل مآ رأيتـ ..... إلخ
 
the rest is amasing
 
^_^
 
 
 
Al-Malak 
 
u did some mistakes when u wrote the song lemme correct it
is world full of 
people in need
also, is there something i 
have missed
also,cuz i don't understand when 
so many need somebody 
 
keep going 
 
