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Ok, how about this one
Jeddah Floods
zzzzz Before one year ago, Jeddah were flooding. Also, three months ago it is flooding again!.
In addition, there are many houses, buildings and cars were destroyed because of floods. So, there are several reasons of Jeddah floods.
zzzzz First reason, climate change, we all know that the rains became heavy if we compared with previous years. At the same time, there was no flooding earlier in Jeddah because of rains in the way back history. Finally, climate change one of the main causes of the flood.
zzzzz Second, bad of discharge rains on Jeddah streets makes the flood more dangerous. Moreover, more than one hundreds peoples drowned in their cars and all these because of bad discharge. For this reason, those how cause of all the problems and floods must be punished.
zzzzz Another reason, careless of sit streets especially those in south of Jeddah. For example, the south street of King Abdul-Aziz University became like a river when it is rains heavily. However, there are promises not to repeat these floods.
zzzzz At the end, we look forward to what happened will fit many of errors in government departments. Above all, the dangers of floods.
I hope it's better than previous essay Raghad