i will tell you the truth.
in my opinion, i think you deserve 4 coz your essay needs to many things like good structure, lots of information, many sentences, and good organization
please, don't be sad but you want the truth coz you are learning brother
can i tell you something? I want you to write an essay everyday and we will help you to correct it for you. I promise you to help you as possible as i can, deal ?
start from today and don't stop writing from today until saturday, and you will see yourself getting better and better
believe brother you can do it easily
just practice with time
like imagine yourself in your exam and you don't have any time except two hours
so, practice more and more
see ya
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