29-05-2011, 05:23 PM
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تاريخ التسجيل: Apr 2010
كلية: كلية الآداب والعلوم الانسانية فرع كليات البنات
التخصص: !!*English*!!
نوع الدراسة: إنتظام
المستوى: متخرج
البلد: جــــدة
الجنس: أنثى
المشاركات: 6,426
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رد: الرايتنج مجنني
?...The red colors: why did you change the beginning to Others Coz it is the beginning of the paragraph and it is the first sentence of the essay
So, how can we say Others..? "And" the internet are such
I think we have to use a verb right
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:and in this one too
. Also, when you want to communicate with your family, especially for who travails out of his country to learn or live there, you can use the internet.
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:You change it too
Also, when you want to communicate with your family, especially those who away from his country to learn or live there, they can use the internet
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Ok... can we change his to their or not ...?? Coz you didn't correct it for me
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Again thank you for your time and correction, too
Thank you from my heart
Raghad Mohammed
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التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة رغد محمد ; 29-05-2011 الساعة 05:26 PM.
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